Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 6:52 pm
Drunkin_Dog Posted: Jan 25 2004, 07:09 PM
I wrote this a while ago, and I'm a lil hesitant in posting it, but.. I wrote this for my best friend last summer... tell me what you think
I never said you are my life
Just the best damn part of it
Your are worth more stars then five
And more candles then are lit
Don`t hang with me
I`ll bring you down
You should live with glee
Without sadness, nor a frown
I dream I hold you, close and tight
I never want to let go, infear you`ll leave me
So I hold you with all my might
Until you ask that I release thee
Then I wake, cold and shivering
Though I`m not, I feel alone
Then I relise, there`s no point in fearfull quivering
Because you are there, and I`ve seen the light which you have shown
I know it sucks, but whatever, tell me what you guys and girls think
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Twilight_Star Posted: Jan 25 2004, 08:11 PM
I actually like it.. you shouldn't be hard on yourself you write good
I wrote this a while ago, and I'm a lil hesitant in posting it, but.. I wrote this for my best friend last summer... tell me what you think
I never said you are my life
Just the best damn part of it
Your are worth more stars then five
And more candles then are lit
Don`t hang with me
I`ll bring you down
You should live with glee
Without sadness, nor a frown
I dream I hold you, close and tight
I never want to let go, infear you`ll leave me
So I hold you with all my might
Until you ask that I release thee
Then I wake, cold and shivering
Though I`m not, I feel alone
Then I relise, there`s no point in fearfull quivering
Because you are there, and I`ve seen the light which you have shown
I know it sucks, but whatever, tell me what you guys and girls think
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Twilight_Star Posted: Jan 25 2004, 08:11 PM
I actually like it.. you shouldn't be hard on yourself you write good